Unapologetically Pink


Too early
April 18, 2007, 10:11 pm
Filed under: accident, bicycle, death, fragility, life, pink, serious

My scout alerted me to the scene outside my window. Cordons, a large lorry. Policemen, black and white hats, fluorescent jackets. Notepads, cameras. Official hustle and bustle.

A red bicycle.
A large white cloth.

A young life, extinguished. Too early.

Tourists posed by the Bodleian, parading toothy smiles for freeze frame portraits. Online comments tittered about negligence: the city drivers, the city cyclists, the city council. Workers reclined on benches, guzzling down precious morning coffee.

While he still lay there.

Maybe a brother. A son, certainly. Perchance, a lover. A friend, a student … no more.

There was a backpack, its straps cut. A wallet, a mobile phone. A few other pocket items. Simple tatters, now, of a life gone by.

The cordons came off within hours. Nonsensically, life poured back with remarkable ease. The news listing dropped from its lead position, the excited chatter of finishing finalists floated up to my room. People forgot, or never knew.

A devastating reminder of the fragility of life. My deepest sympathies to all those who knew him.


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There is something awfully moving about the belongings of someone who has just died. Kind of a last reminder that this person started out on the day unaware of its import. A thoughtful piece. Thank you.

Comment by Oscarandre

dust is heavier when it wears a backpack, indeed

watch impartial treatment, let it internally bleed

he might be an angst devil’s son

born to wreck traffic on highway 101

and yet the hum of heart calls for shame

evne though dead plant life never carries name

Comment by edwardbear

For me your words seem to connect in a way that to me tells me something about yourself. It helps me know that I am not the only person to struggle with doubts and the darkness I face all the time but you seem to carry a light with you that is unimagineable. You have a gift and please keep on writing.

Yours in True, Gabriel

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